Lotr: Shelob

[Simon_S]

This is my entry to the 4th round of the MELO at the 'pages. I would like to get some critism about the spider, since I'll use it in one of my next MOCs too... Thank you!

Have a great day!

Buurli Burri

[gazumpty]

I'll be honest and say I can't fault it...I love the imposing monolithic nature of the beast looming over our wee hero. Great work Buurli Burri!

[Deathleech]

I think it just needs a little color variation. Overall not a bad design at all though.

[Str0ngbad]

I feel the same as Deathleech. You might add some variety to the landscape as well. I know it's a drab location but just a little bit would go a long way. Your textures are fantastic though.

[MstrOfPppts]

Wow, a great spider! I really think the round legs do the trick - it's a lot better then the original in my oppinion. I also like the angled rocks but I think it could be done a bit better so that the straight edges are more hidden. Overall a very nice creation!

[TheAshTree]

Very nice MOC!

[Gatekeeper]

I don't know if the spider really needs color variation, but maybe a little dark brown would make her more "real".

I'm not a huge fan of the completely tiled ground, but that's probably just me. I like natural ground to have some studs showing.

[Legonardo]

Great build! loving teh rockwork, the only thing i can find on the spider is its to black, but adding other colors wouldn't do it much good I think.

[Brickington]

I like the likes very much, they seem to do the trick. I do agree with the others, it's needs a little more color variation. The rock work is just great, so good job there.

[LEGO Train 12 Volts]

I like this spider ...I like how is black ...like a dark night!

Well done!

[Yanthedestroyer]

The spider looks good, maybe some different splashes of color to break up the black? Also, a little more flexability for its legs, the seem a bit straight at parts. Otherwise, its awesome!