Professor Thaum Posted February 27 Posted February 27 *Your entry has earned 14 XP + 2 bonus for a total of 16 XP (S:4, T:5, A:5) Commissar Rax, his new friend Jordan Arendale, the Empire's greatest commando, whom Field Marshal Cody had assigned to Rax's command per agreement, and Jar Jar Binks were greeted on board of the ancient Centerpoint station by Imperial Military Investigator, Captain Twigs. - I am so glad you brought a Commando trooper and, erm... Jar Jar here, - Twigs said, - we really need assistance in locating the intruders now... - No problem, Captain! - Rax said, - please show us how the investigation is going. The four entered the tractor beam power room. - This is a terrorist attack, sir, - Twigs told the three, - we located some radio-controlled devices, connected to the tractor beams' power generators. Those devices were attached to bombs, wich were supposed to go off at any attempt do disconnect the radio devices. We are sure that the intruders' intent was to seize control of the tractor beams... - Did your sappers disarm the bombs, Captain? - Arendale asked. - Yes, all the ones we discovered. Currently they are looking for other explosives, while our technicians are carefully detaching the radio devices off the power generators. We have trouble with locating the terrorists though... - Hold on! - Rax said, excited, - I think Jar Jar found something interesting! - Oh sorry, mesa just found disa bombad red spider here... - This spider couldn't have gotten in such a secure room on its own, Comrade the Political Director, - Arendale told Rax. - Yes. I know them! Such spiders live only in the Southern jungle of the station, - Twigs added. - Jar Jar, you are a genius! We must check the southern entrance to the power rooms immediately, - Rax said... - Sir! - a Stormtrooper officer told the Investigator via hologram, - we discovered the intruders in the Southern rooms! We neutralised all but three of them, whom we are pursuing at the moment! The leader is armed with a lightsaber, sir! We identified him as Kyle Katarn! - This is a job for me, then! - Rax said through comlink (together with Arendale, they were already heading to the place as fast as they could), - let's see if I can hold up against Kyle with my Beskad and swordsmanship skills... all credits to @Max_Lego for this one too Quote
MKJoshA Posted March 26 Posted March 26 This is a great build. Your center platform is nicely round, the pipe going into the back wall looks good, and just overall it has a great aesthetic. Quote
Max_Lego Posted March 26 Posted March 26 7 hours ago, MKJoshA said: This is a great build. Your center platform is nicely round, the pipe going into the back wall looks good, and just overall it has a great aesthetic. Thanks for the appreciation! Sadly (or thankfully - part 3 was a disgrace, yet Epilogue would've been very fun) - Centerpoint station mystery is left unfinished... Quote
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